Review

The feedback that I got back for my first draft that I will use in the future is to make sure that my font, colors, and picture reflect with my topic. I chose the background color green to represent the colors in organic foods such as vegetables. I chose a big enough font so it is an easy-read. I rearranged my pictures that I have so far to go with the text at the time. I also need to make sure I am citing everything that I use. I also need to add some links.

Kaitlin reviewed my webtext in class. She wanted me to add the topic "why organic food is more expensive than conventional foods." In my draft 2 I did add that subtitle. She also wanted to know more about how organic food is exactly grown and what is done to it. I am going to take everything Kaitlin said in consideration and use it to update my webtext and to improve my webtext.

My Audience

My topic is organic foods. I think people that would be interested in this topic could be mothers that have young children and a younger crowd who likes to work out and keep up with their weight and stay balanced. My audience will be make up of around 100+ Americans. I would hope Americans can understand the English that I will use in my writing. I would think my audience does not know that much about organic foods, which is their reason for reading my article. My purpose for this article on organic foods is to inform/persuade. Hopefully after reading what I have to say about organic foods, my audience will realize that organic foods is really the best way to go. My tone will not be too serious but I want people to be interested. I will try to grab their attention and not bore them.